a thought on Loving

October 16th, 2009 § 3

The weekend in now here, let’s use some loving and an upbeat message to get the weekend started in a good light (don’t mind the constant music puns):

Where is the cry my heart makes?
A cry for desire,
A cry in the key of naturals.
Like the painter’s brush on canvas,
Like the golden ray of a sun rise,
‘Eureka!’ – my hearts pounds…
Oh, not the suddenness my heart lost – it’s this:
Think of it as a piece of two, or, a puzzle fits.
Maybe shaped like a triangle intersecting a circle,
And round and round it goes, converging to this one point -
Here is my heart, here is the price.
This heart, a center of those intersections.
And, on your key, my heart will tune to its note,
A Key on your note, the Key of F.

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§ 3 Responses to “a thought on Loving”

  • vizionheiry says:

    How beautiful. I think poem begins in line 3 with “here is my heart, here is the price” as the center. It's almost a sonnet. Where “here is my…” is the volta. Have you tried working with that form? Well I dig it.

    Love the new layout by the way. White backgrounds, I LOVE.

  • Dele, Jr.
    Twitter:
    says:

    Thanks for the love of the new background, I figured it's high time the site matured ;)

    I haven't specifically tried working in that form; I sure will do, thanks again.

  • Dele, Jr.
    Twitter:
    says:

    Thanks for the love of the new background, I figured it's high time the site matured ;)

    I haven't specifically tried working in that form; I sure will do, thanks again.

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